Was really well made! I loved the narrative, it was really well done and how the scares happen and just how neatly everything is shown visually as well as by the player doing things. Loved how things progressed and changed as the player did actions, and well, this was a really well made and great game, good job, truly!
I Learned About Eyeless Jack Creepypasta After Playing The Game. So Everything Happening Was A Surprise And Mystery To Me. I Enjoyed The Game Nevertheless.
I love the idea of making creepypasta inspired games! I wasn't too familiar with Eyeless Jack growing up, but I do know of the other giants (ie. Smile Dog, Jeff the Killer, Slenderman).
Wish the game was a bit longer, but only so much can be done for a relatively short story so I understand!
I really felt the vibes, its a really good game but I felt really sad when I ended the game, cuz the main hero was... uhmm.. he was like too casual for a person to lost his kidney and his brother... & I'm really anggyy cuz the game was too short,I wanted to continue this story for a longer period, I though liked it a lot :)
Not necessarily a BAD game, the idea was there, however there is nothing unique about it. Moreover, the story makes no sense with random unexplained shit happening for no reason with no explanation and the entire gameplay loop is no different from other games either (Monotone chores - jumpscare - end)
I chose a pretty badly written creepypasta to begin with. I couldn't think of any good plot to make the game and I knew that it was gonna be a generic indie game, so I chose to adapt the creepypasta from every detail. I am aware of the fact that it's not unique, I wasn't expecting it to be on top of the page. I made this game mostly for the people that wanted me to make an Eyeless Jack game. If it wasn't for the people who enjoy my games, I wouldn't make this.
Thank you for your honesty, I'll do a better job in the future projects.
Dog shit. Slow and boring. This follows the same beats as every other shitty psx horror game. Walk around, do monotonous chores, all for a shitty jumpscare at the end. Absolutely nothing unique or interesting in this game. Also, do not put voice acting in your game.
I know what it means. I have played great indie games. I have watched great indie movies. Having a smaller team or an incredibly low budget does not mean that can't create something great.
Instead of using those limitations to your advantage, you chose to create another shitty horror game. Bland and boring with no distinctions from 90% of the games released here.
Just because you are independent doesn't mean you are void of criticism !!
Well, you are absolutely right about that. It's true that even with a low budget you can make a great game. I wasn't expecting this to be on top of itch and it doesn't deserve to be there when there's much better games than this. I made this for the people that love my games and generally those who love creepypastas. I'm working on a big and finally an original project right now, so I'll try to correct my mistakes.
maybe I was a little harsh with my review and I apologize for that. This is only your 3rd or 4th game, of course it won't be perfect. You're only going to get better and better
Most likely not. I'm working on a big project and in the meantime I might do Smile Dog. There's not really any more creepypastas left or they just aren't worth remaking into games, so that's probably gonna be the last creepypasta game.
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great game! wondering what the ending could mean, but other than that I enjoyed this very much.
Cool little game. Love the concept of creepypasta inspired games!
I got home jacked
Such a great short horror game! Awesome job!
Great story ! That is truly where the game shines, the story keeps you interested the whole time. Very enjoyable and short little horror game !
I made a video on your game if you're interested :)HE WILL HAVE YOU. YOU CANNOT RUN FROM HIM.
Was really well made! I loved the narrative, it was really well done and how the scares happen and just how neatly everything is shown visually as well as by the player doing things. Loved how things progressed and changed as the player did actions, and well, this was a really well made and great game, good job, truly!We just go straight back to sleep after losing a kidney? is that normal who knows?
At first I was suspecting my bro, but turns out he was a good guy after all..
copy link for video on the game https://youtu.be/rTk5rBX-xlI
LOVED IT!
https://www.youtube.com/@scarygamesat3am
Gostei muito de absolutamente tudo, de verdade! Gameplay:
great game
Great game! but it doesn't include roman kabab so 8/10
good stuff!
I love the idea of making creepypasta inspired games! I wasn't too familiar with Eyeless Jack growing up, but I do know of the other giants (ie. Smile Dog, Jeff the Killer, Slenderman).
Wish the game was a bit longer, but only so much can be done for a relatively short story so I understand!
Do you plan on doing a game for Ben Drowned?
[1st video in link]
Thank you! I'm not planning on making Ben, not really into these types of creepypastas like him or Sonic.exe
I really felt the vibes, its a really good game but I felt really sad when I ended the game, cuz the main hero was... uhmm.. he was like too casual for a person to lost his kidney and his brother... & I'm really anggyy cuz the game was too short,I wanted to continue this story for a longer period, I though liked it a lot :)
Not necessarily a BAD game, the idea was there, however there is nothing unique about it. Moreover, the story makes no sense with random unexplained shit happening for no reason with no explanation and the entire gameplay loop is no different from other games either (Monotone chores - jumpscare - end)
preach !!!
I chose a pretty badly written creepypasta to begin with. I couldn't think of any good plot to make the game and I knew that it was gonna be a generic indie game, so I chose to adapt the creepypasta from every detail. I am aware of the fact that it's not unique, I wasn't expecting it to be on top of the page. I made this game mostly for the people that wanted me to make an Eyeless Jack game. If it wasn't for the people who enjoy my games, I wouldn't make this.
Thank you for your honesty, I'll do a better job in the future projects.
DONT SLEEP OR HE WILL KILL YOU | a good Quick indie horror game!
This Game is Based On A True Story | Eyeless Jack
i wish the devs added more storyline to thing ngl
Another AMAZING Game from one of the BEST on itch.io! Keep up the awesome work!
Dog shit. Slow and boring. This follows the same beats as every other shitty psx horror game. Walk around, do monotonous chores, all for a shitty jumpscare at the end. Absolutely nothing unique or interesting in this game. Also, do not put voice acting in your game.
google the meaning of an indie game before commenting on mine or other games on itch ;)
I know what it means. I have played great indie games. I have watched great indie movies. Having a smaller team or an incredibly low budget does not mean that can't create something great.
Instead of using those limitations to your advantage, you chose to create another shitty horror game. Bland and boring with no distinctions from 90% of the games released here.
Just because you are independent doesn't mean you are void of criticism !!
Well, you are absolutely right about that. It's true that even with a low budget you can make a great game. I wasn't expecting this to be on top of itch and it doesn't deserve to be there when there's much better games than this. I made this for the people that love my games and generally those who love creepypastas. I'm working on a big and finally an original project right now, so I'll try to correct my mistakes.
maybe I was a little harsh with my review and I apologize for that. This is only your 3rd or 4th game, of course it won't be perfect. You're only going to get better and better
I also apologize for the behaviour on my first response. Thank you!
Rest in peace, Edwin...
Unexpected ending! Love it!
cool game!
damn you are good, at making horror games. could you make a part 2? Even though there isnt, a part 2 of the creepypasta.
Most likely not. I'm working on a big project and in the meantime I might do Smile Dog. There's not really any more creepypastas left or they just aren't worth remaking into games, so that's probably gonna be the last creepypasta game.
But that's just what I think right now, maybe after the big game I'll go back to making more short creepypastas.
Ahh, I almost forgot about this creepypasta.
7/10